Adverstisements are the most frequent toxic of the mental pollutants. It is unbelievable how we can see and hear advertisement everywhere. One of the important items mentioned in this passage, which I felt very impressed, when it said that billion of commercials from different sites, like radio, TV are dumped into North America. I would say that this point is very valid, for the following reason: if media would not exist, humanity could not keep infomed of what is happening in the world, so media is very important for our society. I mostly agree with the author saying that advertisements are important and popular.
Hype by Kalle Lasn talks about that nowadays we can see and hear advertisements everyday, everywhere and anytime, and nobody is exempt to see them. We can see advertisements on TV, on the radio, buses, stadiums or even in a classroom. The author also mentioned that even when we are shoping we can not be exempt and we can see a logo or product message.
Adverstisements has floated our lives from so many ways. That they want to make sure that people buy their products. So they put their advertisements in so many places for us to see. Like for example, you see advertisements on TV, hear on the radio, or billboards on the highways, and even on your computer you see so many ads on the internet.
So now we see we can not escape the advertisements that companies want us to see about their products that they want us as consumers to buy. Because companies want us as consumers for life.
In the second passage is being shown how many things can happen any hour, minute or second. For example filling your car with gas, going to a bank to get some money, you take your highway and by the time you are driving you can see different billboards with important messages, also children being in class osbserve different Pepsi and Snikers ads. I would say that this is the world that we live, where a teacher, a student, a businessman a babysitter, a housewife or anybody is around adverstisements. In the line which says that nobody is exempt, it is really true because anywhere that you go you can see an advertising. Sometimes we could be tired about advertisements, being repetead hundred of times, but we need to obtain the importance that it helps customers to obtain the best product in quality, quantity and cost. Another important detail is, the more advertisements appear the more goods are sold.
Hype by Kalle Lasn talks about that nowadays we can see and hear advertisements everyday, everywhere and anytime, and nobody is exempt to see them. We can see advertisements on TV, on the radio, buses, stadiums or even in a classroom. The author also mentioned that even when we are shoping we can not be exempt and we can see a logo or product message.
Adverstisements has floated our lives from so many ways. That they want to make sure that people buy their products. So they put their advertisements in so many places for us to see. Like for example, you see advertisements on TV, hear on the radio, or billboards on the highways, and even on your computer you see so many ads on the internet.
So now we see we can not escape the advertisements that companies want us to see about their products that they want us as consumers to buy. Because companies want us as consumers for life.
In the second passage is being shown how many things can happen any hour, minute or second. For example filling your car with gas, going to a bank to get some money, you take your highway and by the time you are driving you can see different billboards with important messages, also children being in class osbserve different Pepsi and Snikers ads. I would say that this is the world that we live, where a teacher, a student, a businessman a babysitter, a housewife or anybody is around adverstisements. In the line which says that nobody is exempt, it is really true because anywhere that you go you can see an advertising. Sometimes we could be tired about advertisements, being repetead hundred of times, but we need to obtain the importance that it helps customers to obtain the best product in quality, quantity and cost. Another important detail is, the more advertisements appear the more goods are sold.
1. Overall, what is the author doing well? (It is always good to start off with a strong point).
ReplyDeleteAnswer: State your claim, do you agree or disagree with the authors point?
2. Is the essay around 400 words?
Answer: No, your essay is not 400 words, it is less, you need more evidence to support your believe.
3. Does your author (your team mate) have a clear claim? What is it?
Answer: Yes you have a clear claim, adverstisements are the most frequent toxic of the mental pollutants.
4. Does the author have a clear introduction? How could it be improved?
Answer: No, you do not have a clear introduction, but you can prove your claim with more evidence.
5. Does the author summarize the reading completely and clearly? Why or why not?
Answer: No, you did not summarize your reading clear. This is because you need to summarize your completely and clearly before you understand it.
6. Does the author respond to the reading with specific examples from real life?
Answer: You did not give examples, and you need to give more evidence.
7. Is the writer clear and easy to read? What patterns of errors do you see that need to be addressed in the future?
Answer: The pattern of error is incomplete paragraphs and more examples and evidence to understand your claim.